So, here's an idea: do you want some critical feedback? Want to see the sorts of affects your work invokes, aside from the usual "Wow, that's cool" and "I like it"? Link it in my comments, and I'll do what I can.


You Can't Own a SentenceYou cant own a sentence, You cant buy a word. You cant horde a limerick, Or keep a speech from being heard.You Can't Own a Sentence
You cant stop the pens from scratching, to the ticking of the clock. You cant stop the minstrels singing, About the love weve all forgot.
You can, however, join them. And make your presence known. You can illustrate your universe with meter, rhyme, and tone.
You can make your lines forgotten, Or sell them every page. You can stand up for your people, And marbleize your joys and rage. &n
| I'm looking for some good, well written stories (not fan fiction) and some feedback on my own. Also looking for original art, mainly fantasy, sci-fi, surreal, etc. I like art that I can sink my teeth into. A piece that gives me both emotional and intellectual insight. I'm looking for work that punches me in the gut and gives me time to think while I'm recovering, because it's the same thing I want to do myself. |
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"You're off the edge of the map, matie. Here there be monsters!" - Hector Barbossa.
"Of all the things Ive lost, I miss my mind the most." Mark Twain.
"An intellectual is someone who has found something more interesting than sex." Edgar Wallace.
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Beauty is Monstrous
That's the one, and everyone should take a look at it. It's a great piece of art.
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Looking for good work to critique. Leave me a comment with your piece if you have something.
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I needed words like yours toady.
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Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively.
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